我写的英文版军训打油诗一首

想~想

<>To be excellent as my mate</P>
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<>The wind blows away the cloud,</P>
<>The sun shines bitterly on the ground.</P>
2 m# q5 r& V! w) {% s8 L% |<>I feel pain on my feet,</P>
<>My back is covered with sweat,</P>
. w$ {% r6 K; ^0 y# W( H3 j- z<>My knees is shaking,</P>
<>The military training is tiring.</P>
<>But I know everyone will bear the hardship,</P>
2 p9 x6 D7 B" g# R$ [<>No one will give up.</P>
<>With the discinpline in my mind,</P>
: J& t, {2 W6 I% Y7 r<P>I will obey the offical's command.</P>
<P>I will do my best,</P>
<P>To be excellent as my mate.</P>

风吹沙地

哈哈有意思,不过应该是To be excellent as my mateS吧

<>There're some words that can't be undersstood by me.</P><>How wish you were here!!My Longman!!</P>